Contents page feedback

1. What do you think of my layout on my contents page? Does anything need to be changed? why? why not?

2.What do you think of my articles? are they appropriate for my target audience?

3.Are the images i've used on my contents page typical of a pop music magazine? why? why not?

4. Do you think anything needs changing?

5. Do you think the language is appropriate for my target audience?

This is my contents page that I showed my target audience:

I asked 3 girls who are 16-17 that fit into my target audience about my contents page. Two of the people I asked said that they didn't think my layout to be changed and that it was really good but one of my people said they thought the articles need to be more spaced out as people may not want to read everything if it's all really close together. They all thought that my articles were appropriate for my target audience.  The images are also typical of a pop music magazine because they appear to be fun. The language appears to be appropriate for my target audience as it's informal and chatty.